Volcano Story

Hello people welcome to my blog post toady I am going to talk about my writing. we have been doing show not tell, this is one of my story's hope you enjoy.

here is my writing.

There were 4 people on an old boat. The 4 names were Jimmy, Chips, Salad and Lazar. Let's talk about Jimmy, is 19 years old, he is addicted to computer games. Next let's talk about chips, he is 18 years old he is the youngest, he is also addicted to games. Salad and Lazar are 25 years old, they like to go outside and explore. Salad and Lazar pulled Jimmy and Chips on the boat. 

They found a good spot to stop and have a swim. The got to the top of the boat and jumped in. The first one said it was like going into a shower. The next one jumped in because he did not believe him. Then The rest of the people jumped in. You could see the bubbles in the water because it was so warm.

As they look around they saw an island the grass was more green then the color green. There was heaps of green trees and bushes. Most of the island was green grass, tall and short trees were hanging on the island. Trees were hanging over the warm water.

After taking in all the trees and grass they noticed a big volcano that looked like it was just about to explode. They looked to the bottom of the water and noticed magma at the bottom. Heaps of dark smoke came out the volcano. Some of the magma and smoke was coming down the big volcano.

They went to escape but then they realized that their boat was broken and didn't move. All of them went and tried to find there sail. They couldn't find it so swam to the island and made a sail out of leaves and branches. The volcano exploded and red hot lava came out faster than a water full. They swam back to the boat and put the sail on and started to travel back.

When they got past the volcano they started to eat some food. All of them had a home made sandwich. After they eat them they were home. The boat was docked. But then they realized that they left chips at the big volcano.

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