My Meteor Writing

Hello people to day I am going to talk about mt meteor story. It tock me two days to do this work. It was had to come up with what to do. 

here is my work. 

One flashy night I went to the top of a humongous mountain that was shaped like a potato and a triangle. It was my favorite mountain. There was a small path going to the top. At the top there was a steep ledge. My name is Mash Potato, I like to eat cheese pizza. 

I lived just off the big city. It looked like the city from batman. When it is night I always look at the city from the mountain. But this time the city looked fake. It looked like it was fading out with the clouds.  Then I looked at the sky and saw some meteors falling.

It first looked like shooting stars, really close to the ground. Then I realized that It was hot flaming meteors. There was 24 meteors about to hit the ground. A Lot of them were still in the dark sky. 

I started to run home then a meteor hit a piece of grass next to me, It made me fall over and drop my flashlight.  The meteor went about 15 meters in the ground. It started to burn some of my shoes off. 

After running in the forest to get home I looked up and saw that the sky was clear. I could not see any meteors. All I could see was the moon, stars and a few clouds. There was about 231 stars in the sky. 

After all the running I felt really hungry and thirsty so I went to KFC to get some chicken wings. I got some chips, a burger and some chicken. Then I went home eating food. I was eating my chips on my way home.

Thank you for looking at my work