writing

WALT. paint a picture in the readers head, include 4 pieces of action in our stories.  use our senses in our writing

My bike was zooming down the sand by the water. The sand was wet and dry. I was trying to get
to the gas station because my bike was almost empty. I was trying to doge the wet sand just in
case I got stuck. I was going slower and slower it was harder to stay up. Then I got stuck in the
sand. My gas was super low. I got off my motorbike and walked to the gas station. when I got
there I borrowed a gas tank and filled it up. I went back and got my motorbike. I left and went to
the airport and was going to USA.

When I got on the plane I bought my computer to play on the way there. I was watching
downloaded movies. 1st I watched IT, it was scary. The movie was sad, bloody and scary.
Then the snakes came, and I got chips, coke and chocolate. It was so yummy.

I looked outside and I saw dark black smoke. “Hello Captain speaking WE ARE GOING DOWN”
I was so worried and scared. The plane was going to crash and I thought I was going to die.
“BOOM” the plane thruster blew up. ‘BOOM” the other one went. It was so loud and annoying.
The end was near and I was going to die. The plane had almost crashed there was about 500
meters from the ground. “BOOOOOOOOOOM” the plane hit the ground. I think I broke my legs.

5 hours latter.”HELP ME PLEASE!”. Nobody came. I killed the other people on the plane.
I don’t no why I killed them. It was hard to move, it hurt a lot. My legs hurt.  I went to make a
raft out of wood and leaves.”Boom,” my flare gun went off but it didn’t work properly.
Then I saw a boat coming my way. I waved like crazy to them.

I was rescued! I got to the hospital and lay down. I was happy to be alive.

The End