here is an example of my writing. can you see it in your head?
One day I was playing Fortnite in real life. I didn’t have a weapon, so I was hiding in a bush. I was looking around to see people and weapons. There was someone running past me I did not move a single bit. He did not see me though. I was spying on the dusty divot. I could smell the dirt from dusty divot and the bush. There were heaps of people there. Someone ran to me. Their footsteps sounded like gun blasts as they thundered at me. They saw me. I began to shake with fear. They shot me in the face with a sniper rifle. I just took the L.
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