Writing

This week for writing we read a story on kiwi kids news. There was a story about should sport be less competitive. I have finished It. We also had to comment on someone else. I commented on my friend Kody.

Here is my work and my comment. 

I believe that it is a good idea to make sports competitive.

The first reason why sport should be competitive is so people don't just walk around and not try.
Also people will think it is just training not a real game. People will like to know if they win or
lose.  

If sport was less competitive people will not try. They will just walk around. If
you played rugby and you were running to get a try people will just watch you.
When they get the ball they will just throw the ball out.

If sport was less competitive and it was a proper game people will just think it is
training not a real game. If sport was less competitive what will the of playing if
people think it is training. People will get mad if people don’t try.

If sport was less competitive and you finished your game you will want to know
if you win or lose. Sports will be less fun if there is no winning or losing. People
will not know if they won or lost.

I think sport should be competitive because people will try more.
They might think it is training not a real game if it is not competitive. People like
knowing if they won or lost. 

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