Last week we had to do a 100 word count story. We had to add it was complete out of tune. It was kind of hard to try add 100 words. I kept adding too many words then too little words.
Here is my work.
I was in a shop I don’t know what I was even doing. I just woke up in the middle of a busy shop. It was so busy I could not move to good. It looked like it was a game shop. There was music playing but suddenly it was completely out of tune. It started to go all fuzzy and cold. I thought there was a blizzard outside or even in side it was that cold. People were confused when I got so cold. It started to get warmer and we looked outside and the blizzard started going away.
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