WALT write instructions. Here are my instructions.
I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Wednesday, 8 August 2018
Friday, 27 July 2018
WALT Write procedures for making a sandwich
This is one I wrote.
By following these instructions you will be able to make a ham and cheese sandwich.
Needs/Equipment
Knife
Plate
Cheese
Bread
Chopping Board
Ham
Steps
(verb at the start of each instruction)
- Wash your hands and dry them
- Get a knife and a plate.
- Get cheese, ham and bread.
- Get a chopping board.
- Put bread on plate.
- Put cheese and ham one slice of bread.
- Put second slice of bread on top andcut it.
- Eat it and enjoy it.
Monday, 18 June 2018
writing
WALT. paint a picture in the readers head, include 4 pieces of action in our stories. use our senses in our writing
My bike was zooming down the sand by the water. The sand was wet and dry. I was trying to get
to the gas station because my bike was almost empty. I was trying to doge the wet sand just in
case I got stuck. I was going slower and slower it was harder to stay up. Then I got stuck in the
sand. My gas was super low. I got off my motorbike and walked to the gas station. when I got
there I borrowed a gas tank and filled it up. I went back and got my motorbike. I left and went to
the airport and was going to USA.
to the gas station because my bike was almost empty. I was trying to doge the wet sand just in
case I got stuck. I was going slower and slower it was harder to stay up. Then I got stuck in the
sand. My gas was super low. I got off my motorbike and walked to the gas station. when I got
there I borrowed a gas tank and filled it up. I went back and got my motorbike. I left and went to
the airport and was going to USA.
When I got on the plane I bought my computer to play on the way there. I was watching
downloaded movies. 1st I watched IT, it was scary. The movie was sad, bloody and scary.
Then the snakes came, and I got chips, coke and chocolate. It was so yummy.
downloaded movies. 1st I watched IT, it was scary. The movie was sad, bloody and scary.
Then the snakes came, and I got chips, coke and chocolate. It was so yummy.
I looked outside and I saw dark black smoke. “Hello Captain speaking WE ARE GOING DOWN”
I was so worried and scared. The plane was going to crash and I thought I was going to die.
“BOOM” the plane thruster blew up. ‘BOOM” the other one went. It was so loud and annoying.
The end was near and I was going to die. The plane had almost crashed there was about 500
meters from the ground. “BOOOOOOOOOOM” the plane hit the ground. I think I broke my legs.
I was so worried and scared. The plane was going to crash and I thought I was going to die.
“BOOM” the plane thruster blew up. ‘BOOM” the other one went. It was so loud and annoying.
The end was near and I was going to die. The plane had almost crashed there was about 500
meters from the ground. “BOOOOOOOOOOM” the plane hit the ground. I think I broke my legs.
5 hours latter.”HELP ME PLEASE!”. Nobody came. I killed the other people on the plane.
I don’t no why I killed them. It was hard to move, it hurt a lot. My legs hurt. I went to make a
raft out of wood and leaves.”Boom,” my flare gun went off but it didn’t work properly.
Then I saw a boat coming my way. I waved like crazy to them.
I don’t no why I killed them. It was hard to move, it hurt a lot. My legs hurt. I went to make a
raft out of wood and leaves.”Boom,” my flare gun went off but it didn’t work properly.
Then I saw a boat coming my way. I waved like crazy to them.
I was rescued! I got to the hospital and lay down. I was happy to be alive.
The End
Tuesday, 22 May 2018
panting a pitcher in the readers head
WALT use our sense in our writing in the readers head
here is an example of my writing. can you see it in your head?

here is an example of my writing. can you see it in your head?
One day I was playing Fortnite in real life. I didn’t have a weapon, so I was hiding in a bush. I was looking around to see people and weapons. There was someone running past me I did not move a single bit. He did not see me though. I was spying on the dusty divot. I could smell the dirt from dusty divot and the bush. There were heaps of people there. Someone ran to me. Their footsteps sounded like gun blasts as they thundered at me. They saw me. I began to shake with fear. They shot me in the face with a sniper rifle. I just took the L.
Wednesday, 11 April 2018
Eraser Face
WALT. to do work like Sebastien Del Grosso
The last piece of artwork we have done this term is inspired by Sebastien Del Grosso. He uses drawing on photos to make his art. We have used as eraser in our photos and had to redraw part of our face. To help us with this we practiced our shading drawing shape drawing earlier in the term.
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