My Meteor Writing

Hello people to day I am going to talk about mt meteor story. It tock me two days to do this work. It was had to come up with what to do. 

here is my work. 

One flashy night I went to the top of a humongous mountain that was shaped like a potato and a triangle. It was my favorite mountain. There was a small path going to the top. At the top there was a steep ledge. My name is Mash Potato, I like to eat cheese pizza. 

I lived just off the big city. It looked like the city from batman. When it is night I always look at the city from the mountain. But this time the city looked fake. It looked like it was fading out with the clouds.  Then I looked at the sky and saw some meteors falling.

It first looked like shooting stars, really close to the ground. Then I realized that It was hot flaming meteors. There was 24 meteors about to hit the ground. A Lot of them were still in the dark sky. 

I started to run home then a meteor hit a piece of grass next to me, It made me fall over and drop my flashlight.  The meteor went about 15 meters in the ground. It started to burn some of my shoes off. 

After running in the forest to get home I looked up and saw that the sky was clear. I could not see any meteors. All I could see was the moon, stars and a few clouds. There was about 231 stars in the sky. 

After all the running I felt really hungry and thirsty so I went to KFC to get some chicken wings. I got some chips, a burger and some chicken. Then I went home eating food. I was eating my chips on my way home.

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Volcano Story

Hello people welcome to my blog post toady I am going to talk about my writing. we have been doing show not tell, this is one of my story's hope you enjoy.

here is my writing.

There were 4 people on an old boat. The 4 names were Jimmy, Chips, Salad and Lazar. Let's talk about Jimmy, is 19 years old, he is addicted to computer games. Next let's talk about chips, he is 18 years old he is the youngest, he is also addicted to games. Salad and Lazar are 25 years old, they like to go outside and explore. Salad and Lazar pulled Jimmy and Chips on the boat. 

They found a good spot to stop and have a swim. The got to the top of the boat and jumped in. The first one said it was like going into a shower. The next one jumped in because he did not believe him. Then The rest of the people jumped in. You could see the bubbles in the water because it was so warm.

As they look around they saw an island the grass was more green then the color green. There was heaps of green trees and bushes. Most of the island was green grass, tall and short trees were hanging on the island. Trees were hanging over the warm water.

After taking in all the trees and grass they noticed a big volcano that looked like it was just about to explode. They looked to the bottom of the water and noticed magma at the bottom. Heaps of dark smoke came out the volcano. Some of the magma and smoke was coming down the big volcano.

They went to escape but then they realized that their boat was broken and didn't move. All of them went and tried to find there sail. They couldn't find it so swam to the island and made a sail out of leaves and branches. The volcano exploded and red hot lava came out faster than a water full. They swam back to the boat and put the sail on and started to travel back.

When they got past the volcano they started to eat some food. All of them had a home made sandwich. After they eat them they were home. The boat was docked. But then they realized that they left chips at the big volcano.

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Athletics At High School

Hello people welcome to my blog to day I am going to talk about Athletics. Yesterday we had to do Athletics again but we did it at the high school. We had to do all of the activates in one day. This time it was to decide who was going to zones. The best one I  did was sprints, I came second in one of my races. The one I did bad at was discus. 

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