Last week we had to do a 100 word count story. We had to add it was complete out of tune. It was kind of hard to try add 100 words. I kept adding too many words then too little words.
Here is my work.
I was in a shop I don’t know what I was even doing. I just woke up in the middle of a busy shop. It was so busy I could not move to good. It looked like it was a game shop. There was music playing but suddenly it was completely out of tune. It started to go all fuzzy and cold. I thought there was a blizzard outside or even in side it was that cold. People were confused when I got so cold. It started to get warmer and we looked outside and the blizzard started going away.
I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.